White male
SAT: 1540 (Math 760, Reading 780)
GPA: UW 3.73/4.0
Rank: 9/~200
Competitive/challenging private school
5s on AP Stats, Bio, English Lang, USH
Taking AP Euro, Calc BC, Physics, English Lit, American Government this year
ECs:
-Academic decathlon: state champions, second place in division at nationals, 8 individual state medals, 3 at nationals, state division high scorer, team high scorer at nationals
-Leader of veterans’ advocacy group responsible for organizing veterans’ benefits, raising awareness for veterans’ issues, and meeting with legislators to effect legal change
-President of school organization in which National English Honors Society members tutor/mentor younger students and students struggling with writing
-Percussion captain and 4-year member of school band, also played in pit orchestra for 5 musicals
-Participant and semifinalist on televised quiz show for two years
Awards:
National Merit Semifinalist
Member of NHS, NEHS, Mu Alpha Theta, Spanish Honors Society
Winner of state medal for excellence in history
AP Scholar award
Applying to major in history and political science
Essays are difficult to evaluate here, but I’ll give my Common App essay a 7.5/10 and my supplementals 8.5-9/10
My “hook” is that my father is permanently disabled from something that happened when I was in elementary school, and my mom has been hospitalized for the past year with a very bad autoimmune disease