"College applicants get creative to a fault" fine line between gimmick & creativity

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A Smith College applicant glued words to a Scrabble board trumpeting her attributes. A Tufts University hopeful designed a neon-green flower made of duct tape. And a teenager desperate to get into Harvard sent in a homemade chocolate replica of the school's Veritas shield.</p>

<p>As the competition for spots increases, anxious-to-impress applicants try to see how far they can go beyond the required essay and forms. Admissions offices at Tufts, Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Harvard and other colleges across the country wind up with a shelf full of items each year, ranging from the adorable and clever to the risqu</p>

<p>In the early eighties there was a popular poster of the actress Nastssia Kinski wearing nothing but a large python. An applicant to a certain Ivy League school, when asked by the essay prompt to “give us a complete picture of yourself” submitted a large poster of himself in the same pose as Ms. Kinski, python and all. At that time the admissions office thought it was absolutely hysterical and admitted him. Not sure that would work now.</p>

<p>No idea if this is true but back in the 90’s I heard a story about a kid whose mother had kept every paper he produced since first grade - every single assignment was an “A”. He boxed it all up and delivered it to Harvard admissions and was admitted.</p>

<p>My oldest was in elem school, maybe 2nd or 3rd grade and I remember thinking - rats - I haven’t kept every single paper she brought home - her life is over. lol.</p>

<p>related story circa 1998
[To</a> jest or not to jest: the college admissions game](<a href=“http://www.paloaltoonline.com/weekly/morgue/monthly/1998_Dec_16.ADMIT.html]To”>To jest or not to jest: the college admissions game)</p>

<p>The pros and cons of showing a college your ‘wacky side’ </p>

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<p>I’ve heard stories of applicants sending chairs with notes on it “This is where I’ll sit if I go to ______” instead of submitting an essay They got rejected. It was for a LAC. On top of that, two kids did it. Not one. I think the lack of originality hurt both. Since, they have gotten too many chairs to count because once, one kid who sent a chair got it. But it’s been abused since.</p>

<p>At NYU, the admin lady was telling us about how someone wrote their essay on a boot and sent the boot to the office. She still has it in her office, she said. I think the kid was admitted. I thought it sounded pretty cool actually. </p>

<p>I find some of these ideas really awesome honestly…but, I do understand some of the decisions. Seriously though, the chair one is pretty lame.</p>

<p>Hmmm, interesting! I browsed the Colleges section of this discussion board. For instance, on the Pomona’s one, there is a thread “Why should Pomona admit you?”, and it is full of nonsense like hot looks, mad beading skills, etc. I bet Pomona recieved a few full sized posters of those “hot” applicants as well as some beaded articles of clothing.</p>

<p>A Syracuse University admissions rep spoke at our high school’s annual college planning night and related two attention-getting strategies that didn’t work in the days when hard copy applications were the rule:</p>

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<li><p>one kid cut his essay into numerous jigsaw puzzle-shaped pieces </p></li>
<li><p>one girl submitted a handwritten personal essay in one of those tightly coiled spiral shapes - using such teeny-tiny letters that no one in the office could finish reading the thing</p></li>
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<p>I think it works if the “gimmick” reveals more about you. If the “mock” press conference was for a poli-sci major it might.</p>

<p>One admitted Dartmouth art applicant printed an essay on the back of a piece of fabric she created. She was admitted (and mentioned in a college book by Dartmouth admissions.)</p>

<p>DS was deferred by Dartmouth. I had really creative gimmicks in mind. He wasn’t at all interested. He was rejected. We’ll ever know, but I really think one of those would have worked since Dartmouth defers only those they are really considered.</p>

<p>But he’s a much less flamboyant sort, thought these ideas hooey. And by then I think he was starting to prefer Williams (his original first choice) where he was accepted with no gimmicks whatsoever. It really suits is quiet, laid-back style.</p>

<p>Maybe the creative gimmicks don’t work because people realize they might not be the creative brainchild of the applicant.</p>

<p>S was in a hs leadership program where admission was based on a resume and essay. Another classmate was also admitted- the essay his mom wrote for him was creative and brilliant. At the orientation ‘his’ essay was read as the model for the type of go-getter attitude they were looking for. He ended up being an inhibited, intimidated non-contributor and eventually dropped out of the program. (BTW, he was a nice kid, smart, but no social skills and incredibly shy and withdrawn.) I always wondered whether the program sponsors ever thought about how this kid’s paper-image stacked up against his real life persona.</p>

<p>The only “gifts” these admissions officers give a damn about are of the endowment-enhancing variety.</p>

<p>[College</a> Application Essay - Netlore Archive](<a href=“http://urbanlegends.about.com/library/blbyol3.htm]College”>http://urbanlegends.about.com/library/blbyol3.htm)
An essay commonly thought to be a real application submittal, but actually not. Definitely of the “out there” variety…</p>

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<p>What has been floating around in cyberspace for some time:</p>

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<p>Papa Chicken, thanks for sharing! The essay is ridiculous in every single way - I love it. =] It makes a pretty interesting point too. You can do all these amazing things that are enriching and life changing but you still haven’t gone to college, meaning that you still have growing up to do. That was an interesting read.</p>

<p>Yeah, I’ve read it but it was still fun to read it again which tells me that it is well written and not just ridiculous.</p>

<p>I love it. It reminds me of some contemporary Postmodern writers. I don’t find it ridiculous. The escalating achievements leave me breathless. The writing is so wonderful! I think the writer makes it obvious he hadn’t done these things. What an amazing achievement: some of the glory still clings to writer as he satirizes these kind of essays while writing a brilliant one. A pretty astounding feat in my book – one that ranks well among all the others he lists.</p>

<p>So as long as the ‘gimmick’ wasn’t uncreative, rude, crude, or excessively large could it hurt the applicant? I was thinking of doing something that showed that I had really researched the colleges and was truely dedicated to going there, and I have the numbers to attend, but I don’t want them to see it and think negatively of me.</p>

<p>I don’t think it would hurt you. D’s friend started every sentence in her essay with the number 13, a big thing at Colgate, where she was applying ED. She got in and a letter praising her “gimmick.”</p>

<p>It definitely depends on the gimmick. Showing that you’re really thinking about the school and trying to stand out in the crowd (not TOO much) is a good thing. But going over the top and doing really in-depth stuff can often make you just look annoying. </p>

<p>If even you think it is a “gimmick” instead of just “creative”, I would say don’t do it.</p>

<p>The essay posted by Papa Chicken was amazing. That was definitely a fun read, and the last line took me by surprise, but in a good way. And I thought the entire thing was a bunch of Chuck Norris jokes put together… Haha.</p>

<p>I’d like to think writing an essay like that would be more effective than baking cakes or sending in large/unique/weird items or gifts. Less hassle (and less postage cost) for both the applicant and the college, I guess, and, if done right, can probably be just as effective as something outlandish. You can definitely be creative and display some personal qualities in the essay. It might require some outside-of-the-box thinking, but it’s still effective.</p>

<p>I remember a former student at my high school came and visited for Alumni day and gave some tips about applications and essays. He said he got into CalTech by writing his essay about baking cakes (because he loved to cook/bake things) and tied it into chemistry (his intended major). I thought that was pretty cool and unique because I’m pretty sure most people don’t associate baking cakes with CalTech or science in general. Heh.</p>

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<p>I do! :wink: And I’m sure folks at CalTech do too. Do you know that chemists are in general good cooks but they usually dislike cooking (too similar to their work). Anyway, that must have been an interesting essay to read!</p>

<p>PS Have you seen the Magic School Bus episode where Ms. Frizzle and her clalss almost gets baked into a cake?</p>

<p>I’ve often heard about an aspiring Harvard applicant who was asked to write an essay on courage, and this is what he wrote…</p>

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<p>(Leaving 2 pages blank)</p>

<p>This is courage.</p>

<p>They say he got in; I don’t know if it’s true though. In most cases (rather all of them) you end up appearing to be very casual about the whole admissions process. Not to mention that mailing a photograph of yourself on the cover of the TIME magazine is exceptionally idiotic. Although admission rates are at an all time low, I don’t think picturing yourself in your favourite pair of Veritas underpants would convince the office to change their initial impression of you.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind having free cookies If I were an adcom though.</p>