"College applicants get creative to a fault" fine line between gimmick & creativity

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A Smith College applicant glued words to a Scrabble board trumpeting her attributes. A Tufts University hopeful designed a neon-green flower made of duct tape. And a teenager desperate to get into Harvard sent in a homemade chocolate replica of the school's Veritas shield.</p>

<p>As the competition for spots increases, anxious-to-impress applicants try to see how far they can go beyond the required essay and forms. Admissions offices at Tufts, Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Harvard and other colleges across the country wind up with a shelf full of items each year, ranging from the adorable and clever to the risqu</p>

<p>In the early eighties there was a popular poster of the actress Nastssia Kinski wearing nothing but a large python. An applicant to a certain Ivy League school, when asked by the essay prompt to "give us a complete picture of yourself" submitted a large poster of himself in the same pose as Ms. Kinski, python and all. At that time the admissions office thought it was absolutely hysterical and admitted him. Not sure that would work now.</p>

<p>No idea if this is true but back in the 90's I heard a story about a kid whose mother had kept every paper he produced since first grade - every single assignment was an "A". He boxed it all up and delivered it to Harvard admissions and was admitted.</p>

<p>My oldest was in elem school, maybe 2nd or 3rd grade and I remember thinking - rats - I haven't kept every single paper she brought home - her life is over. lol.</p>

<p>related story circa 1998
To</a> jest or not to jest: the college admissions game</p>

<p>The pros and cons of showing a college your 'wacky side' </p>

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While other high school seniors were probably spending their November afternoons studying or writing essays for their college applications, Tyler McNiven mounted a campaign to become a Stanford freshman next fall. </p>

<p>And "campaign" is exactly the word to describe the Woodside High School senior's strategy to impress Stanford's admissions committee. Concerned that his application alone would not get him into the school of his dreams, McNiven, a self-described Oval Office aspirant, took the political route, holding press conferences, passing fliers that detail his qualifications and engaging in marathon handshaking. </p>

<p>Driving around campus with a red car and a white bullhorn (Stanford's colors) and with a small tree (the university's mascot) strapped to the top of the car, McNiven discussed his strategy with a reporter via cell phone. </p>

<p>"I feel the application doesn't show everything," McNiven said. "They'll see the wacky side of me. I'm exposing more of myself to the Stanford community." </p>

<p>McNiven's campaign raises questions many college applicants have probably asked themselves: How much of a risk should I take to get "noticed?" Or is it better to play it safe and risk appearing boring? </p>

<p>Though McNiven's actions probably fall into the extreme category of application gimmicks, college admissions offices do receive a fair share of gifts and unusual gestures, all designed to demonstrate an applicant's affinity with the school. </p>

<p>Generally, admissions officers are not impressed. </p>

<p>"Frankly, gimmicks don't work," said Joe Case, interim dean of admission at Amherst College in Massachusetts. "It really needs to be something of substance." </p>

<p>"It can be something clever and substantive--that's a positive thing," Case said. "Driving around campus: No. Sending the world's best brownie recipe: No." </p>

<p>When the students' qualifications come up for final review, Case said, nothing substitutes for good old-fashioned book learning. </p>

<p>"Basically, you're going to have to back it up with secondary preparation (and) test scores," Case said. </p>

<p>Christoph Gutentag, Duke University's director of admissions, said he hasn't seen too many outrageous stunts in his 15 years of working in college admissions. </p>

<p>"It doesn't happen as much as you might think," Gutentag said. "I think most students take the process seriously." </p>

<p>Not to say Duke doesn't receive its fair share of mementos every application season. The list of gifts received by Gutentag's office reads like a mail order catalog: 4-foot greeting cards, life preservers with "Duke" emblazoned on them, prescription bottles bearing cutesy messages, cookies and more cookies. </p>

<p>"If it's edible, we generally eat it," Gutentag said. </p>

<p>Both admissions officers agreed that gimmicks usually suffer by failing to have much of a point. Gutentag said applicants should find better modes of self-expression, whether through the application essay or by sending bona fide support materials, such as a sample of the student's artwork or a tape of a musical performance. </p>

<p>"(Applicants should) be their best selves and think about the best ways to have that manifest itself," Gutentag said. </p>

<p>Gutentag said that while gimmicks rarely hurt a candidate's prospects, an occasional one has been known to backfire. In the case of McNiven's campaign, his chances depend on whether the admissions committee finds him amusing or immature, Gutentag said. </p>

<p>"It all depends whether they see him as being creative or harassing," Gutentag said. "That might influence their decision. There's always the possibility of going overboard. </p>

<p>"There's always a risk of hurting your cause rather than helping it." </p>

<p>Jean Dawes, a guidance counselor at Palo Alto High School, said she wasn't aware of Paly students participating in application ploys. She said she doesn't advise her students to send items along with their applications unless they reflect talents or accomplishments. </p>

<p>"Everybody likes chocolate chip cookies," Dawes said. "But I don't know if it ever gets written on an applicant's file that 'Mom makes great cookies,'" Dawes said. </p>

<p>As for McNiven, who applied for early decision, he may hear as soon as this month about his collegiate fate. Stanford's dean of undergraduate admissions did not return a phone call about McNiven's application or Stanford's admission process. </p>

<p>But McNiven might have done well to consult "Questions and Admissions: Reflections on 100,000 Admissions Decisions at Stanford," a book written by Jean Fetter, a former Stanford dean of admissions. The book advises: "It is definitely a myth that a gimmick can make a difference in the final decision."

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<p>I've heard stories of applicants sending chairs with notes on it "This is where I'll sit if I go to ______" instead of submitting an essay They got rejected. It was for a LAC. On top of that, two kids did it. Not one. I think the lack of originality hurt both. Since, they have gotten too many chairs to count because once, one kid who sent a chair got it. But it's been abused since.</p>

<p>At NYU, the admin lady was telling us about how someone wrote their essay on a boot and sent the boot to the office. She still has it in her office, she said. I think the kid was admitted. I thought it sounded pretty cool actually. </p>

<p>I find some of these ideas really awesome honestly...but, I do understand some of the decisions. Seriously though, the chair one is pretty lame.</p>

<p>Hmmm, interesting! I browsed the Colleges section of this discussion board. For instance, on the Pomona's one, there is a thread "Why should Pomona admit you?", and it is full of nonsense like hot looks, mad beading skills, etc. I bet Pomona recieved a few full sized posters of those "hot" applicants as well as some beaded articles of clothing.</p>

<p>A Syracuse University admissions rep spoke at our high school's annual college planning night and related two attention-getting strategies that didn't work in the days when hard copy applications were the rule:</p>

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<li><p>one kid cut his essay into numerous jigsaw puzzle-shaped pieces </p></li>
<li><p>one girl submitted a handwritten personal essay in one of those tightly coiled spiral shapes - using such teeny-tiny letters that no one in the office could finish reading the thing</p></li>
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<p>I think it works if the "gimmick" reveals more about you. If the "mock" press conference was for a poli-sci major it might.</p>

<p>One admitted Dartmouth art applicant printed an essay on the back of a piece of fabric she created. She was admitted (and mentioned in a college book by Dartmouth admissions.)</p>

<p>DS was deferred by Dartmouth. I had really creative gimmicks in mind. He wasn't at all interested. He was rejected. We'll ever know, but I really think one of those would have worked since Dartmouth defers only those they are really considered.</p>

<p>But he's a much less flamboyant sort, thought these ideas hooey. And by then I think he was starting to prefer Williams (his original first choice) where he was accepted with no gimmicks whatsoever. It really suits is quiet, laid-back style.</p>

<p>Maybe the creative gimmicks don't work because people realize they might not be the creative brainchild of the applicant.</p>

<p>S was in a hs leadership program where admission was based on a resume and essay. Another classmate was also admitted- the essay his mom wrote for him was creative and brilliant. At the orientation 'his' essay was read as the model for the type of go-getter attitude they were looking for. He ended up being an inhibited, intimidated non-contributor and eventually dropped out of the program. (BTW, he was a nice kid, smart, but no social skills and incredibly shy and withdrawn.) I always wondered whether the program sponsors ever thought about how this kid's paper-image stacked up against his real life persona.</p>

<p>The only "gifts" these admissions officers give a damn about are of the endowment-enhancing variety.</p>

<p>College</a> Application Essay - Netlore Archive
An essay commonly thought to be a real application submittal, but actually not. Definitely of the "out there" variety....</p>

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This satirical essay, or a version of it, was written by a high school student named Hugh Gallagher, who entered it in the humor category of the Scholastic Writing Awards in 1990 and won first prize. It was subsequently published in Literary Calvalcade, a magazine of contemporary student writing, and reprinted in Harper's and The Guardian before taking off as one of the most forwarded "viral" emails of the decade.</p>

<p>Though this was not his actual college application essay, Gallagher was ultimately accepted at NYU, where he graduated in 1994. Since then he has worked as a freelance writer. His first novel, Teeth, was published by Pocket Books in March 1998.

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<p>What has been floating around in cyberspace for some time:</p>

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This is an actual essay written by a college applicant to NYU in response to this question:</p>

<p>3A. IN ORDER FOR THE ADMISSIONS STAFF OF OUR COLLEGE TO GET TO KNOW YOU, THE APPLICANT, BETTER, WE ASK THAT YOU ANSWER THE FOLLOWING QUESTION: ARE THERE ANY SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCES YOU HAVE HAD, OR ACCOMPLISHMENTS YOU HAVE REALIZED, THAT HAVE HELPED TO DEFINE YOU AS A PERSON?</p>

<p>I am a dynamic figure, often seen scaling walls and crushing ice. I have been known to remodel train stations on my lunch breaks, making them more efficient in the area of heat retention. I translate ethnic slurs for Cuban refugees, I write award-winning operas, I manage time efficiently.</p>

<p>Occasionally, I tread water for three days in a row. I woo women with my sensuous and godlike trombone playing, I can pilot bicycles up severe inclines with unflagging speed, and I cook Thirty-Minute Brownies in twenty minutes. I am an expert in stucco, a veteran in love, and an outlaw in Peru.</p>

<p>Using only a hoe and a large glass of water, I once single-handedly defended a small village in the Amazon Basin from a horde of ferocious army ants. I play bluegrass cello, I was scouted by the Mets, I am the subject of numerous documentaries. When I'm bored, I build large suspension bridges in my yard. I enjoy urban hang gliding. On Wednesdays, after school, I repair electrical appliances free of charge.</p>

<p>I am an abstract artist, a concrete analyst, and a ruthless bookie. Critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. I don't perspire. I am a private citizen, yet I receive fan mail. I have been caller number nine and have won the weekend passes. Last summer I toured New Jersey with a traveling centrifugal-force demonstration. I bat 400.</p>

<p>My deft floral arrangements have earned me fame in international botany circles. Children trust me. I can hurl tennis rackets at small moving objects with deadly accuracy. I once read Paradise Lost, Moby Dick, and David Copperfield in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. I know the exact location of every food item in the supermarket. I have performed several covert operations with the CIA.</p>

<p>I sleep once a week; when I do sleep, I sleep in a chair. While on vacation in Canada, I successfully negotiated with a group of terrorists who had seized a small bakery. I balance, I weave, I dodge, I frolic, and my bills are all paid.</p>

<p>On weekends, to let off steam, I participate in full-contact origami. Years ago I discovered the meaning of life but forgot to write it down. I have made extraordinary four course meals using only a mouli and a toaster oven. I breed prize-winning clams. I have won bullfights in San Juan, cliff-diving competitions in Sri Lanka, and spelling bees at the Kremlin.</p>

<p>I have played Hamlet, I have performed open-heart surgery, and I have spoken with Elvis.</p>

<p>But I have not yet gone to college.</p>

<p>(The author was accepted and is now attending NYU.)

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<p>Papa Chicken, thanks for sharing! The essay is ridiculous in every single way - I love it. =] It makes a pretty interesting point too. You can do all these amazing things that are enriching and life changing but you still haven't gone to college, meaning that you still have growing up to do. That was an interesting read.</p>

<p>Yeah, I've read it but it was still fun to read it again which tells me that it is well written and not just ridiculous.</p>

<p>I love it. It reminds me of some contemporary Postmodern writers. I don't find it ridiculous. The escalating achievements leave me breathless. The writing is so wonderful! I think the writer makes it obvious he hadn't done these things. What an amazing achievement: some of the glory still clings to writer as he satirizes these kind of essays while writing a brilliant one. A pretty astounding feat in my book -- one that ranks well among all the others he lists.</p>

<p>So as long as the 'gimmick' wasn't uncreative, rude, crude, or excessively large could it hurt the applicant? I was thinking of doing something that showed that I had really researched the colleges and was truely dedicated to going there, and I have the numbers to attend, but I don't want them to see it and think negatively of me.</p>

<p>I don't think it would hurt you. D's friend started every sentence in her essay with the number 13, a big thing at Colgate, where she was applying ED. She got in and a letter praising her "gimmick."</p>

<p>It definitely depends on the gimmick. Showing that you're really thinking about the school and trying to stand out in the crowd (not TOO much) is a good thing. But going over the top and doing really in-depth stuff can often make you just look annoying. </p>

<p>If even you think it is a "gimmick" instead of just "creative", I would say don't do it.</p>

<p>The essay posted by Papa Chicken was amazing. That was definitely a fun read, and the last line took me by surprise, but in a good way. And I thought the entire thing was a bunch of Chuck Norris jokes put together... Haha.</p>

<p>I'd like to think writing an essay like that would be more effective than baking cakes or sending in large/unique/weird items or gifts. Less hassle (and less postage cost) for both the applicant and the college, I guess, and, if done right, can probably be just as effective as something outlandish. You can definitely be creative and display some personal qualities in the essay. It might require some outside-of-the-box thinking, but it's still effective.</p>

<p>I remember a former student at my high school came and visited for Alumni day and gave some tips about applications and essays. He said he got into CalTech by writing his essay about baking cakes (because he loved to cook/bake things) and tied it into chemistry (his intended major). I thought that was pretty cool and unique because I'm pretty sure most people don't associate baking cakes with CalTech or science in general. Heh.</p>

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I'm pretty sure most people don't associate baking cakes with CalTech or science in general.

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<p>I do! ;) And I'm sure folks at CalTech do too. Do you know that chemists are in general good cooks but they usually dislike cooking (too similar to their work). Anyway, that must have been an interesting essay to read!</p>

<p>PS Have you seen the Magic School Bus episode where Ms. Frizzle and her clalss almost gets baked into a cake?</p>

<p>I've often heard about an aspiring Harvard applicant who was asked to write an essay on courage, and this is what he wrote...</p>

<p>.
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<p>(Leaving 2 pages blank)</p>

<p>This is courage.</p>

<p>They say he got in; I don't know if it's true though. In most cases (rather all of them) you end up appearing to be very casual about the whole admissions process. Not to mention that mailing a photograph of yourself on the cover of the TIME magazine is exceptionally idiotic. Although admission rates are at an all time low, I don't think picturing yourself in your favourite pair of Veritas underpants would convince the office to change their initial impression of you.</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind having free cookies If I were an adcom though.</p>