<p>I disagree with fendergirl. Input and critique are very valuable tools for college essay writing as well as for writers, and this is how writing is taught now. Process and rewriting are important in order to develop your piece and I think if someone can listen to feedback and rewrite an essay they are not stuck in a rut. As long as you are the one doing the writing.</p>
<p>I completely agree with those who are saying that the colleges want to hear a clear honest voice, with simple and direct writing. Unless you are a very skilled writer. They want to learn something about you that makes you tick and shows how you are different and how you contribute to others, your school, your community.</p>
<p>Ideally, you "show" your goals, accomplishments and personal qualities rather than "tell". You must realize that there is a vast increase in applicants since the dark ages, so distinguishing yourself is more difficult than ever. A considerate, entertaining read is a treat, I'm sure.</p>