<p>Hello all,</p>
<p>I completed my college essay for SBU. I wrote on a topic of my choice. My SAT score is not that strong, so it depends a lot on my college essay. </p>
<p>I would appreciate if you guys could proof read my essay and give an honest evaluation! I really need your help. Who ever is willing to help me out, comment so I can PM you the essay.</p>
<p>Many Regards
Action1</p>