College Essay For Stony Brook University

<p>Hello all,</p>

<p>I completed my college essay for SBU. I wrote on a topic of my choice. My SAT score is not that strong, so it depends a lot on my college essay. </p>

<p>I would appreciate if you guys could proof read my essay and give an honest evaluation! I really need your help. Who ever is willing to help me out, comment so I can PM you the essay.</p>

<p>Many Regards
Action1</p>

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<p>il read it. Pm it here</p>

<p>I will read if you like just send it to me </p>

<p>Sent from my T-Mobile G1 using CC App</p>

<p>Sure I could read, PM it over.</p>

<p>Thanks a lot for your help. PMed you all. If any one else is willing to read my essay, comment!</p>

<p>Regards</p>