Columbia ED essay

<p>anyone wants to help me critique my essay? i don't need any nitpicking about grammars and sentence structure right now, just stuff like overall impression, ideas and whether i need to incorporate a new direction. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>Sure, just PM it over to me and I’ll give you a good critique.</p>

<p>why not? lol pm me</p>

<p>DSI, its a new one lol</p>

<p>sure, i’d be happy to help. dont forget to put the prompt in the message too. or put it at the bottom to see if i can guess</p>

<p>I’ll edit it for you pm me</p>

<p>Pm me too please!</p>

<p>Sure, PM me with prompt.</p>

<p>PM me, I’ve been critiquing essays since I was 7 for my dad. ;)</p>

<p>Would love to help. PM me.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>PM it to me too…</p>

<p>I’d like to read it</p>

<p>Good choice selecting Columbia ED (in my opinion at least). I think, in my year, most of the people who got in Columbia were early decisioners! I can throw you my own Columbia ED essay if you want to take a peek. PM me if you like.</p>

<p>PM it over!!!</p>

<p>sure PM it over</p>

<p>sure i can help. sincerely, james</p>

<p>i’d be happy to read it! pm please</p>

<p>sure i’d be happy to wendy</p>

<p>i’d be happy to help! pm it to me!</p>