Columbia Supplement Essays

<p>Hey, I just got rejected by my early decision school (UPenn) so I'm feeling pretty crappy about my whole application... :( I was hoping to get some advice about the rest of my application... obviously my common app can't be changed, but here's my supplement essays for Columbia. Please let me know what you think; any advice is greatly appreciated :) </p>

<p>Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why. (1500 crct.)</p>

<p>Columbia is a highly appealing university, and I’m sure the admissions officers hear this from countless applicants every year. With a solid core curriculum, high academic rankings, and a beautiful campus on Morningside Heights, it is sure to attract many students. However, those are not the only reasons I would like to attend Columbia University. It’s not just for the campus life that I’m drawn to; it’s the academic standards, and the specific programs that are available.<br>
I have always been a dedicated student, and I have high standards for myself. With that in mind, I am set on receiving the best education there is. For someone with a strong interest in international affairs, Columbia’s School of International and Public Affairs (SIPA) presents an enticing opportunity. After three semesters of studying at Columbia College, I would like to apply for the MIA degree in SIPA. The Masters of International Affairs degree would allow me to explore my interest in our world and what happens on the international stage. It would allow me develop my foreign language skills through a year of studying abroad, and equip me with knowledge about major global issues and public policies, giving me a chance to be actively involved on the world stage. In other words, Columbia’s International Affairs program is a perfect fit for me, and my interests. </p>

<p>Please tell us what you found meaningful about one of the above mentioned books, publications or cultural events.
As a girl who likes war novels, I fall into a minority group. But there is a reason for this weird affinity, an origin for this ‘abnormal’ behaviour. That origin is Kurt Vonnegut’s Slaughterhouse-five. Reading this book outside of class meant that I had no one to explain the hidden symbols and themes, and without an initial point from which I could start my interpretation of this book, my first impression of the book was: “This is absurd. I have no idea what is going on.” Between Billy Pilgrim’s accounts of his war experience, his life before war and his abduction by Tralfamadorians, there seemed to be no connection at all, and I shook my head as I continued reading without much interest. But soon, patterns began to emerge, and as I understood those patterns, I began to see why this was called the “best wartime novel”. Without having directly said so, Kurt Vonnegut successfully portrayed the affects of war on a soldier’s mentality. The subtle hints and clues, difficult to notice at first, have all been carefully planned out. Seamlessly, they are inserted in the novel with precision, each one with a definite purpose. For the first time ever, I realized the power of language, and the importance of literature. I fell in love with this book, with war novels, and with Kurt Vonnegut’s work. </p>

<p>Please tell us what academic class has been your favorite and why.
At the end of grade 11, I hesitantly chose a philosophy course on my course selections. As a student more inclined towards the sciences, I like things with actual answers, theories that can be proven, and laws that will hold in all circumstances. Not surprisingly, the first class of the year posed a question that basically turned my life upside down.
“How can one know anything?”<br>
Indeed, how can I know anything with certainty? What is the basis for knowledge? I cannot; there is no basis for knowledge. Without knowledge I am left only with belief: belief about all things, material or abstract, belief about everything I choose to accept as valid, belief that what scientists tell me is the truth. The notion that everything I “know”, that all the laws of chemistry, physics and biology are just beliefs, blew my mind; everything that I had carefully constructed with what I had assumed was “knowledge” was torn down with this single blow. It was then that I realized several things. The first: there is no absolute certainty, so I must always ask questions in order to minimize the uncertain. The second: the mind is the most powerful thing. A few words can change entire perspectives, and a new concept can tear old ideas apart. The third: philosophy is my new favourite class.</p>

<p>For applicants to Columbia College, please tell us what attracts you specifically to the field or fields of study that you noted in the Application Data section. If you are currently undecided, please write about any field or fields in which you may have interest at this time, but have not yet selected as a major interest.
A few weeks ago, I had no idea what I wanted to study in university. Like most of my peers, I had certain interests, but I could not imagine myself focusing on one of them for four years and having to compromise the others. Time was running out, and I was desperate for advice. One day, my counsellor sat down at our lunch table, and asked us: “if you had to choose two of your interests that you know you want to continue being involved in, what would they be?”
Without hesitation, I replied, “Global Citizenship Club and Model United Nations.”
He asked: “Have you ever considered studying International Relations?”
Right away, I was interested. I found out more about the major, researched job possibilities in the area, and read reviews by current undergraduate students in this field. I wanted to smack my own forehead; how could I have not thought of this sooner? Here was a major that combined the two areas I am most involved in, one with a humanitarian focus and the other with a political focus, and which would allow me to pursue my interest in both of these areas. By the end of the day, I had made my decision. This is what I wanted to study: how countries operate internationally, the nature of political relations, and how different countries have different policies regarding the same social issue. I want to understand why the world is as it is today, and how the world will confront the problems we have. </p>

<p>Thanks in advance! :)</p>

<p>answers should be more polished; have an academic advisor/english teacher review. there are some punctuation issues - punctuation marks always go inside the quotation marks. answers to first question should be less generic; the opening was a bit weak and there MUST be reference to the core curriculum whenever discussing CU’s appeal - it’s the jewel in their crown and is often cited as the key to the highest level undergrad education received by CU students (my son is a soph). Best of luck!!</p>

<p>Hey lioness4, thanks for the advice, I will definitely get my essays checked. In the first essay, I did mention the core curriculum at CU, but do you think I need to be more specific or emphasize it more?</p>

<p>I would get some real info about one of the core classes like lit hum or cc and use it somewhere but not something you could easily get off the website. They love interdisciplinary stuff like modern film and classical Greek philosophy…what’s your intended major? Good luck - I was just telling myson how much I think the corer is benefitting him. It’s more than just cocktail party talk…it’s how you relate to the world</p>

<p>Lightbulb: sorry, u did discuss major… I wasn’t paying attention there. Waiting for son’s EA decision today</p>

<p>You are aware that you CAN change your common app before you send it on to other schools. My S did this so he could include a different essay. You just need to create another version. It’s pretty easy to do…</p>

<p>Step1: You must submit the Common Application to at least one institution. When this is complete, you must logout of your account.</p>

<p>Step 2: You must then click on the following weblink:
<a href=“https://www.commonapp.org/application/applicantlogin.aspx?allowcopy=true[/url]”>https://www.commonapp.org/application/applicantlogin.aspx?allowcopy=true&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;
You will be presented with a login screen to the Common Application. You must then enter your existing Username and Password and click Login.</p>

<p>Step 3: You will be presented with a screen titled ‘Application Versions’, whereyou will see information about the application that you’ve already submitted. You may then click on the ‘Replicate’ link to make an alternate version of your submitted application. When this is complete, a second version will be visible on this screen and a special drop down will appear in the upper right corner of the application to allow quick access to all your applications.</p>

<p>The first essay is generic and impassionate. You say that you want to go to Columbia because it is a good school that has a good IR program…and that’s it. You need to be more convincing. You say that Columbia’s program is a good fit for you…because you have high standards and are interested in IR- O rly? You do realize, with the reasoning you are giving me, every decent school with an IR program is perfect for you, right? I suggest expanding on specific points that are exclusive to Columbia. For example, you can talk about how the year abroad will allow you to develop your own theories and opinions- a chance that you won’t get through another IR program (I’m not familiar with IR programs, so I don’t know if the point I mentioned is true). You can also mention specific student organizations that are related to your major. For instance, UPenn has this international business volunteering program. If Columbia has something similar, you should definitely mention it and claim that it will complement your studies at Columbia (it will). </p>

<p>The second essay is good. However, I don’t understand why you believe literature is important; you should elaborate a little more.</p>

<p>The third essay is excellent- waaay better than anything I could have written. 11/10</p>

<p>The fourth essay is… I don’t know. You waste 90 words just to say that you weren’t sure about what you wanted to study- be less verbose. I still don’t understand why you find IR appealing- is it just because it merges your two interests? That’s pretty shallow. Do you have some amusing anecdote you can use for this essay? We need something that explains where your interest in IR comes from, not a simple just-because. Is there something in your background that is related to this inclination? Did you develop an interest in IR from you travels? Were the two activities you mentioned vital to your interests- how so? </p>

<p>I apologize for being extremely harsh and picky- it was for your own good.</p>

<p>“The first essay is generic and impassionate. You say that you want to go to Columbia because it is a good school that has a good IR program…and that’s it.”</p>

<p>Agree - you need to be more specific. I think you could drop the first paragraph, start your essay with the second.</p>

<p>Also, I don’t think it is such a good idea to post your essays on the Internet.</p>

<p>i agree with all above posts and particularly agree that essays don’t belong on open site like this…be more prudent. And remember: it’s all about the core so do your research!! You can relate IR studies to the foundations of western civilization of CC course…eg</p>

<p>If you need assistance with your essays, you should send messages to users you can trust-- most preferably users that have already applied to colleges and are not going through the admissions process. I applied ED (UPenn) and got accepted, so you can send your essays to me if you need an extra opinion. Besides, since I have nothing better to do, I wouldn’t mind helping out random people on the internet o_O.</p>

<p>thanks to everyone’s comments and suggestions, they have helped a lot. I guess I won’t be posting the updated versions on this thread any more, but would anyone like to take a look at the new ones and my essays for other colleges I’m applying to? Cardgames → hint hint hint :wink: Thanks so much!</p>

<p>Hey Lightbulb123, I am applying to Columbia and I just wanted to share some info with you. The things that these other users have said about posting essays here have been verified. I just found someone copy the first few lines of your “book essay” on essayforum. You can find the copied lines at this link. Do be more careful, wouldn’t want your hard work to be wasted :slight_smile: </p>

<p>[Old</a> Man and The Sea / Columbia University supp/ Meaningful book](<a href=“http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-essays-2/old-man-sea-columbia-university-supp-meaningful-book-46622/]Old”>Old Man and The Sea / Columbia University supp/ Meaningful book)</p>

<p>Please use old threads for information only.</p>

<p>NOTE: The OP has not posted for over a year.</p>