common app: elaborate on activity

<p>Theres a part of the common app where we are asked to elaborate on one of our activities in 150 words or less.</p>

<p>I opened it with introducing how i got to know the organization and made that flow into what the organization does. I was able to do this as well cover the main points of the organization with exactly 150 words.</p>

<p>Do you think it would be better to take out the part where i got to kno the organizaiton and just jump straight to what it does. If i do this I can add a lil more info on the organization itself. (though i already covered the important points of the organization)</p>

<p>You might want to consider taking out the part where you got to know the organization, jumping straight to what it does, and then talking about what you did as a member or leader of this organization.</p>