Common App Essay - A juxtaposition of topics

College Essays
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<p>I kind of meshed two common app essay topics together--the significant experience and the person with significant influence ones--since the memory I chose to write about naturally includes both. Would anyone like to read/proofread/criticize it? I only just got the words down yesterday, so I'm open to any and all changes that you would prefer to have in word choice/etc. </p>

<p>Takers?</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to look at it.</p>

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<p>This essay is OFFICIALLY GAFFE APPROVED. Your need to read it just went up 1000%.
Just kidding. Any others?</p>

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<p>Bump, damn it ><</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to help. Will you help me??</p>

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<p>damn it, I keep getting conflicting opinions about this one ><</p>

<p>BUMP</p>

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<p>sure i will</p>

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<p>Conflicting opinions...
I hope I am not the only person who said your essay was good.</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you would like a parent's comments...</p>