Common app essay advice...

<p>Hello!
So..I just wrote the first draft of my common application essay. I had the hardest time determining what to write about- so I decided to just get something down and see how it turned out. Unfortunately, I don't think I like it. I'm debating whether or not to just scrap the idea altogether and start over..however, time is running out..</p>

<p>I am wondering if anyone's willing to look over my essay briefly, to see if it can be fixed or if I should just get rid of it and change my topic. </p>

<p>Thank you so much!</p>