Desperately Need Common App Help

<p>I know it's entirely my fault for waiting so long to start, but I totally need some feedback on my common application essay. I wrote like four different ones and kept scrapping them. My latest one is super boring and cringe-worthy to ready. If anyone can help me fix things up a bit, I'd like totally appreciate it. I can return the favor too, of course!</p>

<p>I’ll help if you want</p>