Common App Essay - Am I on the right track

College Essays
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<p>I have written a rough draft of my Common App essay. Not sure if I am on the right track with this one or should I scrap it and start again?? </p>

<p>I'd so appreciate some critiquing. Please no 2014ers tho!</p>

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<p>I neglected to mention that the essay is entitled “Pornography”!!</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

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<p>Seems very unorthodox! I would be glad to give you some feedback on your essay as I feel like i have a few experiences to share after myown college admission process!</p>

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<p>I wana read it! PM ME</p>

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<p>PM ME! i wanna read it too</p>

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<p>…i just wanna know what the hell it’s about, haha.</p>

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<p>PM me and I will give you feedback!</p>

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<p>i’d definitely give you feedback. just PM me</p>