Common App Essay and EC short answer

<p>I'm trying to finish up my common app over the break. Would anyone like to review a nearly final version of my essay and EC short answer? Any thoughts or editing would be appreciated.</p>

<p>I'm willing!</p>

<p>I wouldn't ever plagiarize. I just like English. I like to read other people's work.</p>

<p>PM it over!</p>

<p>send it over...</p>

<p>I shall read and critique (if you want). PM away!</p>

<p>pm me-i'll read it</p>