Common App essay..hmm what do u think?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>for the "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience
there, and why is it meaningful to you?" </p>

<p>i was going to write about my first experience of volunteering at a big hospital...and how i was freaked out at first but then..loved it...and loved helping people....and just makes me happy when i am there</p>

<p>is this too cheesy???</p>

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<p>it’s not that bad of a topic but its kind of cliche tho… try to think something interesting that will stand you out.</p>