So I’ve already applied to several different colleges at this point, mostly state college and a few selective liberal art school. The schools I applied to were all through Common App and I chose the first essay topic on background in which I talked about my depression back in 2014 and how it helped to shape who I am as a person. In my essay I included the cause of my depression as my family went through a bankrupt. I however ended my essay on a positive note by claiming that ever since my depression I realized my purpose in life and how I am no longer a pessimist.
My counselor, who helped me through the whole process and edited my essay, told me that it will actually help my chance because my essay is really personal and touching.
But now…I am panicking because several different “college guide” websites strongly urge applicants to NOT talk about depression or any sensitive materials and not use first person perspective…
…I have no idea what to do now??? Can someone please read over my essay and tell me if its too depressing?
I am also in a similar situation. I went to several people about my concerns. The overall advice was writing about this topic would have to be a balance. They told me to not focus so much on the depression, but rather how I grew from the situation. They also warned me against portraying myself as a victim of my illness. I went through several revisions to find that perfect balance of the negatives and positives. I’d say go with your instinct, but make sure the essay conveys an overall positive message (about yourself). Best of luck!
I wouldn’t place too much stock in a college guide that inveighs against writing in the first person, however. If I had to guess, I’d say 95% of college essays are written that way. It’s more difficult to imagine not writing an essay in the first person, actually. Would you trust a swimming coach who tells you never to move your legs?
I wouldn’t place too much stock in a college guide that inveighs against writing in the first person, however. If I had to guess, I’d say 95% of college essays are written that way. It’s more difficult to imagine not writing an essay in the first person, actually. Would you trust a swimming coach who tells you never to move your legs?
I wrote my college app essay last year on my social anxiety. While it may have been about a sensitive issue, I did the same as you, and ended it on a positive note. I was accepted into every college that I applied to, and the most difficult to get into was UNC. I think you’ll be fine. Your essay is allowing colleges to see that you overcame a tough obstacle!