common app essay, opinions?

College Essays
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<p>Hey, just wrote a rough draft of an essay primarily designed for the common app. I don't quite know if this will be the one that will go on there but it's one of the essays I'll be choosing from.</p>

<p>Any takers? Be honest (I can take it). Also, I'd prefer it be someone class of 2008 or before, thanks!</p>

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<p>If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to read your essay.
PM me. :)</p>

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<p>i'll read if you want. just pm me</p>

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<p>I will read it, shoot me a pm.</p>

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<p>from class of 2008. PM</p>

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<p>i would be happy to take give pointers.</p>