Rough draft for common app

College Essays
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<p>Hey,</p>

<p>can anyone read my essay for the common app? It's really still in the begining stages, I just wrote what came in my head, but I want to know if I'm on the right track and if it's interesting enough. Also, is it too long? Cause I've been reading what others say and it seems its too long, so any advice on what I should cut out? Thanks so much!!!!!</p>

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<p>Sure, I can leave my feed-back if you're comfortable</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it. PM me. :)</p>

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<p>Ill edit it if needed
PM me</p>

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<p>i'll see what i can do, pm it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it...college class of '12.</p>

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<p>ill read it..pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it, pm me.</p>

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<p>College Freshman. PM =]</p>