<p>Hey :)
Would really like some feedback on my college app essay. I'm not sure how I feel about it quite yet! I would prefer an adults opinion but I'll accept all advice :)</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Hey :)
Would really like some feedback on my college app essay. I'm not sure how I feel about it quite yet! I would prefer an adults opinion but I'll accept all advice :)</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>