common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Could someone please critique my common app essay about the first prompt? I am applying to schools including UChicago, Berkeley, UCLA, Rice. If I could pm someone, that would be great. Thank you</p>

2

<p>I’ll read it for you!</p>

3

<p>Thanks! I just sent it to you</p>

4

<p>Could anyone else look at it please?</p>

5

<p>I’ll take a look :p</p>

<p>email yeah?</p>

6

<p>I can share it on google docs with you.</p>

7

<p>Can you send it to me?</p>

8

<p>I’ll read!</p>

9

<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>