<p>Could someone give me feedback on my common app essay? This is my first draft. I used the first prompt, about a background or story central to my identity.
Thank you</p>
<p>By the way, I’m applying to Berkley, UCLA, UChicago, Davis, Cal Poly</p>
<p>Sure. You can email it to abiesharon @ yahoo.com I’m applying to UCLA, Berkeley, and Davis as well. Best of luck!</p>
<p>Thank you so much</p>
<p>Is there anyone else who I can pm?</p>
<p>You can PM me if you still need someone.</p>
<p>i have read some essays. you can PM me if you would like.</p>