Common App Essay

<p>Hey guys,
Would anyone be willing to read over my common app essay? It's still pretty rough but I'm hoping to get some major revising done this week and send it in for EA. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>(I'd prefer if the reader wasn't a new member/applying to college this year. )</p>

<p>Send it over if you’d like some hefty feedback! As of now, I’m actually a student at Cornell. Good luck
:)</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to read it? </p>

<p>I would like to read it!</p>

<p>I can read it</p>