Common App Essay

[xinlin]

<p>Can someone read my essay and tell me if it makes any sense?</p>

<p>LOL.. Thanks :) I'm willing to return the favor if you need. ^^</p>

[sweetdream]

<p>I'll read it.</p>

[Aspen_D]

<p>sure shoot it over</p>

[lilav89]

<p>i'll read it</p>

[Lbtg47]

<p>i'll read it</p>

[saucydream]

<p>i'll read too</p>

[anurodh]

<p>i'll read it
just pm me</p>