<p>Can anybody read my essay and critique it? Much help would be appreciated. Thanks</p>
<p>Bump, I guess a catchy title does help...</p>
<p>sure... I'm good at critiquing... send it over!</p>
<p>1) Is it amazingly interesting?
2) Is it less than 800 words long?</p>
<p>If the answer to the questions above is "YES!", PM it to me!
If the answer is "no" and you really need someone to read it, PM it to me anyway.</p>
<p>Haha, uhhh it is a little over 800 words, but I think it is insightful enough to keep you reading.</p>
<p>I'll PM it over anyway</p>