<p>Please critique. the deadline is coming up and need opinions on my personal statement, thanks!</p>
<p>bumpppppp please</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it. I submitted my apps in September so I won’t steal them 
You can PM it to me if you want</p>
<p>i can, pm/email</p>
<p>PM it over! I’m not applying to any of the ivies so don’t worry.</p>
<p>bump any experienced posters want to critqiue??</p>
<p>bumpppppp need some brutally honest feedback</p>
<p>I’ve already submitted my apps! I can take a look if you want.</p>
<p>hey i can help you read. 
pm me. if you want to read mine, feel free to let me know too.</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to look over it for you. PM me?</p>
<p>PM it over if you still need more feedback.</p>
<p>sure! Pm it over! i’m not applying to Ivies.</p>
<p>PM me. I will take a look at your essay.</p>
<p>bump please</p>
<p>bumpppppppppp</p>
<p>what is pm?</p>
<p>PM me. I am happy to me you mine as well if you want.</p>
<p>sure! 10char</p>