Read my essay maybe? Ivy applicant

College Essays
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<p>If anyone wants to help me with my essay by critiquing it, comment and i will PM it. Please let me know if its out of focus or if my topic is bad or if anything is missing, out of place, and even suggestions. I am completely open to criticizm. This is a first draft. I got most of my ideas and sentences in the shower and my sleep lol. There is a goof btw in the second paragraph. Who can spot it?</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>PM me maybe?</p>

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<p>Send it to me</p>

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<p>Bump10char</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I’m a mom who likes to write. Make sure to include the prompt when you PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I’m willing to read it. Good luck on getting accepted.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, hope to return the favor :)</p>

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<p>I’ll look over it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read and critique it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Pm me ill read it</p>

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<p>I can take a look at it :)</p>

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<p>anyone whos wondering, this is common app prompt #1: some students have a background story essential to their identity, please share that story (Worded something like that)</p>

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<p>I can read it if you’d like</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. (I might be too late lol)</p>

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<p>Ill read it! Just PM me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>Its not too late! I have an updated draft now :)</p>