Common App Writing: Anyone willing to take a look?

<p>I have my rough draft finished and am looking for people to edit, critique, and revise my essay so that I have a maximum chance at getting accepted to my colleges. Thanks!</p>

<p>Send it to me.</p>

<p>Sure, I’d be happy to critique! </p>

<p>Bump! Looking for somebody to revise my common app essay!</p>