<p>i have a friend and he is planning on sending a why essay for a school that has a strong record for social activism and community service. It is not something that is totally fake but he doesn't have that much of a record for community service. In his essay he admitted that he didn't have that much of a record. Would that essay turn the adcoms off as hypocritical?</p>
<p>i dunno...sounds honest to me, maybe he could say something about wanting to improve his record in college.</p>
<p>any other thoughts?</p>
<p>i can't tell him anything just from one response right? i need more.</p>
<p>ggpwnedlolkthxbai</p>
<p>But seriously, tell him that he should concentrate on what he did do for the community. Go in dept with the little community service he did. Plus, what other ways besides community service did he did that benefitted the community?</p>