<p>Would anyone be willing to read my main supplemental essay for brown? It's about a topic which is usually on the list of top things not to write about for a college essay, but I think maybe in this essay it's done in a more tasteful way. I'd like to know if this is seriously going to hurt my admissions chances if I send it in. If possible, I'd like people to read it who are very familiar with the college admissions process. Thank you!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it! I will try to give you an opinion of what I feel. I may not be experienced in college admissions process, but I believe we could both learn a little from this.</p>
<p>awww thanks! PM’d you !</p>
<p>I can do a quick read and provide you my personal opinion as a working professional with some knowledge of college admissions.</p>