Cornell Engineering essay

<p>Hi everyone. I am an international student going to apply for Cornell Engineering ED.. I would like someone please proofread my Cornell Engineering essay.. Thanks..</p>

<p>And please chance me as well.. For SAT I get 2020 (a little bit lower i guess), CR-630, W-610 (i dunno wat happens!), M-780..
My GPA is 3.92 UW (My latest result GPA will be 3.94 UW)
I am ranked 1st in my secondary school from 2003-2007
Now I'm undergoing college preparatory program (Year 12)</p>

<p>Among my ECs and awards (I just list a few):
1) President of PROSTAR (its a club aimedto raise awareness of AIDS) - Year 11
2) Treasurer of the same club - Year 10
3) Assisstant Editor of Chinese Cultural Society - Year 12
4) Occasional community services - Year 10, 11, and 12 (visiting home for the disabled, charity run, etc)
5) Certificate of Credit for Australian Mathematics Competition - Year 11
6) Team member of my school's marching team - Year 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11 (this is fun, I like this:)
7) Recipient of Singapore Economic Development Board engineering scholarship to Nanyang Polytechnic - Year 12 (I'm from Malaysia)</p>

<p>Oh ya.. I am going to take SAT 2 for US History, Physics, and Math IIC on Nov 1 (score projected is US History >650, Physics and MAth IIC >700)</p>

<p>Well, what is my chance? I really love Cornell! Its a beautiful place!</p>

<p>Erm.. Anyone, please chance me.. Please.. And also comment on my Cornell Engineering essay?</p>

<p>College prep or doing grade 12? And only your grades from '05 to '08 count since those are the high school years. I don't understand what your school system is like.</p>

<p>Besides that, my app looks fine except for your SAT scores. You should try to improve them. I can help you with your essay if u want.(I already handed in my app).</p>

<p>My country's education system is such that the high school is only until the equivalent of Year 11 of US education system.. Now I'm doing college prep courses which is equivalent to Year 12.. Erm, I know that my SAT score is a bit low, but do you think I got chance for ED? </p>

<p>Thanks for your comment.</p>

<p>PM me ur essay will proof read</p>

<p>PM me your essay I am available.</p>

<p>I think u have a decent chance.</p>

<p>I'll be glad to proof read ur supplemental essay !
Just PM it over .</p>

<p>Thank for your critique and analysis, Shifu Yoda. I'll try to improve on that..</p>

<p>I agree w/ Bruce Lee. PM me.</p>

<p>YTREWQ, this person posted that in 08…i’m pretty sure hes already applied.</p>

<p>^LOL I agree</p>

<p>pm me~ I will be happy to proofread your essay~ and could i also pm you mine? i am applying to CAS</p>

<p>^Dude, to reiterate the previous statement, this guy is ALREADY IN COLLEGE. Hahaha, it was written in 2008.</p>