Could somebody please read my college essay if they have the time?

<p>I will PM it to you. Thank you!</p>

<p>I am not a serious contender for any Ivy league schools (SAT is only a 1990, GPA is good though lol). My top school is Emerson College in Boston. But, I still want my essay to be as good as it can be so any help would be greatly appreciated. </p>

<p>sure I’ll take a look </p>

<p>sure, wouldn’t mind helping </p>