Can anyone check my essay?

College Essays
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<p>It is short, only 400 words so far.
I have not completely finished it but it is mostly done, and I still dont know what to add.</p>

<p>Thanks a lot :)</p>

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<p>It is for an ivy league school !!!</p>

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<p>I can grade this for you. PM it over.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’d love to have a read.</p>

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<p>Sure, just PM me.</p>