Could someone give their opinion on my essay for UNC Chapel Hill please?

College Essays
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<p>I'll message or email it to you
Thanks a lot</p>

2

<p>Sure, just pm it over and I’ll help you out.</p>

3

<p>I would love to read send to me as well. I want go to UNC Chapel Hill, one of my top choices!</p>

4

<p>Yea just PM it over and I will look it over. :)</p>

5

<p>If you need more people to critique I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>If it isn’t too late, I’m here too.</p>

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<p>for sure! i’m applying there too. just PM me!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it pm me</p>

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<p>Hey, PM me! I’ve done a lot of student essay editing before and could do your essay too :)</p>