Could someone look at my essay regarding Orwell's 1984

<p>I am slightly concerned that it is not personal enough; however I describe how my view on history completely changed after reading it.</p>

<p>It is in response to commonapps "Talk about a fictional character, historical figure, or creative work that influenced you".</p>

<p>If I had a chance to write based on that prompt, I would go for Machiavelli's 'The Prince' :-)</p>