Could u read my Commonapp essay?!?! I'm an int'l, thanks~~~~

<p>Hi guys!
I write my Commonapp essay, which I don't really know what sort it should be classified into...
Title is about Atmosunik, namely unique atmosphere.
And the whole essay is about my cultural diversity experiences, intuitions and actions...
I also feel exhausted when Im correcting my grammar mistakes and unidiomaticness...</p>

<p>Are you interested in an East Asian's essay?
Do you also want your essay commented?
Do you wanna find something new?
Are you fed up with your peers' essays?</p>

<p>If SO, please PM or reply to me and do me a favor~~~
Thanks a million~~~~~</p>

<p>If you also want your essay read by an Asian international, dont hesitate to PM me too~~</p>

<p>Thanks again! ^^</p>