Could you please help me with my college essay! urgent!

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<p>With my application due on December 1st, I had to rush and complete my essay. Since it was written in less than 45 minutes, I need help to make it into something presentable.</p>

<p>Could you help me spot any:</p>

<p>-Grammar errors
-Style Errors
_am I missing anything critical? Should I remove any superfluous sentences or add some more in?
-Content revision
-Rate it overall
-What impact did it have on you when you read it?
-Should I reword anything?</p>

<p>Thank you. PM me for a link to my essay,</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>I shall help you. 600+ posts har.</p>

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<p>@noratoledo: Wow. 9 posts from 10:47 to 11:15 in multiple forums, all saying the same thing. I guess the graduate program isn’t working out too well if you have to be a shill for essay services (unless, of course, they are your services). If that’s the case, I suggest that you fire your marketing director.</p>