<p>I have already made several revisions and tightened the essay. It's a pretty short read (one page). Are any experienced members that are older than the class of 2010 willing to critique this essay? PM or email me</p>
<p>I have already made several revisions and tightened the essay. It's a pretty short read (one page). Are any experienced members that are older than the class of 2010 willing to critique this essay? PM or email me</p>