Critique my 500 word Cornell Supplement

<p>please?</p>

<p>:D</p>

<p>I’d be glad to read, but I’m applying to Cornell as well.</p>

<p>Okay, how about anyone else?</p>

<p>alrite. PM it over :)</p>

<p>Anyone with more than 10 posts?</p>

<p>I will give it a read if you would like. I am not applying to Cornell. Though i am usually harsh if it has bs, just a fair warning.</p>

<p>And make sure that it contains an excess of Idiomatic expression. I know that the value those.
All the Best for Cornell.
Cheers.</p>

<p>Thanks bigcrit.</p>

<p>PhoenixR, what do you mean?</p>

<p>I am applying to Cornell as well but I would be happy to read it.
I am to cool to steal ideas from others so no worries but if you arent comfortable, its ok.</p>

<p>Thanks lifegr</p>

<p>PM it to me. i already applied there. i’d love to read it.</p>