Critique My Clive Davis Supplement?

Colleges and Universities A-Z New York University
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<p>Hello everyone! I'm a long-time lurker on these boards, and I recently submitted my application. Like so many of us, NYU is my absolute dream school. I applied for ED2 at the Clive Davis Institute of Recorded Music. I was wondering if I could have any thoughts on my supplement? I realize this is all purely subjective (and arguably pointless), but I've done my whole application entirely by myself, without anyone proofreading or giving input or anything, and any other voice in the matter would greatly help me retain my sanity right now. Thank you. :)</p>

<p>NYU</a> Clive Davis Creative Sample - YouTube</p>

<p>SAT: 1920 (600 CR, 670 Math, 650 Writing)
ACT: 30
GPA: 4.0 UW, 4.375 W
Senior year: AP Calculus and AP Literature (My school only offers 3 AP classes total...)
A few music-related extracurriculars (leads in plays/musicals, tutored 6th grade brass players, played live at some local venues, self-produced EP, varsity choir)</p>

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<p>Any input at all would be greatly appreciated!</p>

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<p>I suppose this is kind of a Chance Me thread? Could anyone help?</p>

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<p>i love your singing. love love love, send me your tracks please <3</p>

<h2>as far as the video itself, i wanted to see more of you actually doing the singing/performing, instead of of photographs of yourself and some semi-relevant pictures.</h2>

<p>in other words, if i were to rate:</p>

<p>audio: 9/10
video: 3/10, honestly could’ve done without it.</p>

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<p>Thank you very much! :slight_smile: I can only hope they’ll acknowledge the effort put into the music. (Hopefully the video isn’t just a distraction?)</p>

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