Critique my EC essay?

College Essays
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<p>I could use some help editing my EC essay...if anyone would be willing to take a look, I'd be forever grateful. :)</p>

2

<p>Bumpity bump…</p>

3

<p>I’ll do it. Pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read :)</p>