critique my essay por favor?

<p>just let me know if you want to and I'll send it to you.....please just give me a better direction on how I'm going to edit this (like what I should keep/take out, and how I should wrap the ending up better). Thanks!!!!</p>

<p>PM me and I’ll send you my email address. I’ll give it a look over tonight/tomorrow.</p>

<p>you can pm me, i got free time</p>

<p>you can pm me too, i will read it this weekend</p>