Anyone Want to Critique my Essay?

<p>I've finished a supplement essay and have been editing it for a couple days. Wanted some feedback from a different perspective. Reply and I'll PM the essay to you.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I can take a look.</p>

<p>Feedback for feedback?</p>

<p>I would be willing to read it. (I applied to colleges last year, so no worries. u vu /b)</p>

<p>i’d like to read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read.</p>

<p>I will read</p>

<p>I will read it.</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>