Critique my essay??

<p>Anyone want to read my essay? I sent this baby out for NYU Stern already, but I was kind of...high when i sent it so i personally think i went off topic from what i really wanted to say. feedback please haha. i'll PM you.</p>

<p>i'll read it...</p>

<p>I would be happy to give it a try.</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>wait... you were high :O sure pm me</p>

<p>I'd like to read the essay you sent to stern</p>