Critique my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Carnegie Mellon University
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<p>Anyone willing to read over my CMU supp essay? I'd greatly appreciate it!</p>

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<p>sure!
<a href="mailto:mahir.kalra@gmail.com">mahir.kalra@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>pm me if you want another critique. thanks.</p>

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<p>ill read, pm it</p>

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<p>I'll review it! PM me if you please.</p>

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<p>i can do that.
<a href="mailto:laure327@msn.com">laure327@msn.com</a></p>

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<p>Just PM it over. I will give you some comments.</p>

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<p>sure...PM it over..i applied to Carnegie Mellon already =P</p>

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<p>I can for you.. PM me</p>