Supplement Essay

<p>I was working on my supplement essay for CMU and wondered if anyone was willing to critique it.
Anyone interested? If you are, just let me know, and give me your email adress so I can mail it to you... And don't worry, I'm not a stalker or anything, so I won't send you, like, spam for years :-)
Thanks!</p>

<p>ill take a look at it :)</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sparkingx254@hotmail.com">sparkingx254@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p><a href="mailto:skarlas991@hotmail.com">skarlas991@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>great, thanks! i've sent it to both of you...</p>

<p>I'd love to read it, too.</p>

<p>sure thing :)
<a href="mailto:zxccxz100@msn.com">zxccxz100@msn.com</a></p>

<p>I can give u some harsh critique :)
<a href="mailto:ljh0875@hotmail.com">ljh0875@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p><a href="mailto:jamesung@hotmail.com">jamesung@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>sure!</p>

<p><a href="mailto:mahir.kalra@gmail.com">mahir.kalra@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>sure, i'll give you some feedback. <a href="mailto:asrinath@hotmail.com">asrinath@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>ill read, pm it</p>

<p>I would love to read it, PM it to me!</p>

<p>sure!
<a href="mailto:mahir.kalra@gmail.com">mahir.kalra@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Sure. I will give feedback. Just PM it to me.</p>