Hi all! So I had a very disappointing and sad night on Thursday when I received my deferral decision from Princeton. I have already posted my stats on another post, but I will do so again. I won’t go super into detail.
TESTS:
ACT: 34 composite
Subject Tests: 700 Literature, 730 Bio, 750 Math Level II (I realize this is a weak part of my application)
AP Exams: I took the most available to me and my schedule (AP Bio: 4, AP Lang: 5, AP World History: 5) and I am taking 4 APs this year (the most I could fit) AP Calc BC (only 10 kids in my school qualified for this class), AP Lit, AP Spanish, and AP US History
ECs:
Really too many to list but I’ll put most important
- Band - French Horn
I have been playing since the fifth grade and am the best in the district. Made multiple district festivals throughout middle school and high school in Massachusetts (one of the most musically competitive states). Auditioned for the All-state music festival last year after recommended to and got in! Played at Boston Symphony Hall. Just received first chair for the district concert this year and will audition again for all states. I also played multiple solos at Carnegie Hall. I take private lessons and am section leader at my highschool of course where I lead sectionals, plan section meetings, have lots of responsibilities. Will highlight this more in the job portion but I teach french horn lessons to middle school students.
I played a live audition at a Princeton professor’s home (organized by me) and received the utmost of compliments. He said he was very impressed, that I sounded better than most of his students at Princeton, that I’d fit right in, he’d love to work with me, hoped I got in, etc. He did, however, say before I even played, that he did not have much of a say. Still am unsure if he even tried to contact admissions or anything (was a super laid back guy, had a chill attitude so I really don’t know)
I did submit an arts supplement of course.
My supplement was centered around my band teacher who was very important to me.
- Jobs - Snack bar all 4 years of highschool, 13 hours a week + Private lesson french horn teacher + Model Yes the last one is a little weird but after being scouted in NYC I signed with an agency just to experience some new things. I have recently taken a break due to school and commitments I find more important, but I was asked to walk at Boston Fashion Week and also have been in multiple shows in Providence. A modelling agency in NYC asked to sign me but I declined due to school commitments. I did not highlight this in my application (it took slot #10) but I think it adds more color.
- Clubs - NHS, President of Multicultural Club, Officer (after interview process) of the Spanish National Honor Society (I run a club of 60 kids... it's kinda rough to be honest), Humanitarian Project (volunteering club, have done up to 100 hours with this and NHS and Summer service trips) Summer trips to West Virginia (building homes) and to New Jersey
- Sports - Did Crew my entire freshman year, had a natural knack for it, but due to medical reasons, I was unable to continue. I moved on to Winter and Spring track in my sophomore and junior year. Ran hurdles and sprinted. Wasn't very good but it kept me active.
I feel like I’m missing something but I’m moving on.
AWARDS:
- Band related: Received Rookie of the Year award my freshman year and received Most Valuable Player my Junior Year
- SUMMA Awards (school, awarded to kids who excel in a certain class and have good characters) Got one in AP World History and Honors English
- THIS DID NOT GO ON APP: Got the highest score in my school on a Wordwright challenge (hard to explain but it’s a reading comprehension challenge) and this led to my class getting 9th out of 694 schools in the challenge.
DEMOGRAPHICS:
White female from an affluent town, very grateful for my opportunities
ESSAYS:
- Common App: Wrote about a very personal and harrowing experience that affected me all throughout my junior year where my younger brother had a terrible illness that still affects him from time to time today. Don’t want to explain in detail as it is too touchy but the essay was very well-written, deep, and describes my mindset perfectly. Just shows how I can overcome things and how I learned to appreciate family
- Pton supp: LOVED this essay. I wrote about my band teacher and my development of love for music (which he helped with). Also mentioned me playing at Carnegie Hall. All about me learning to have confidence. Trying to be as humble as possible here, but this essay made everyone that read it cry. Friends, family, and my counselor – an English major graduate from Yale, teared up and did not hold back words of praise. I am just very extremely proud of it
INTENDED MAJOR:
Neuroscience (after taking AP Bio I fell in love)
Did mention in my interview that my school has a serious lack of science ECs which can explain the lack of it on my resume. Am trying to improve this though.
INTERVIEW:
Went extremely well. We really connected and I think I had great answers.
MY PLAN AFTER BEING DEFERRED:
I am going to send a letter of continued interest really exaggerating how. badly. I want to go to Princeton. I love the school so so so so so so much. I can truly see myself there. In my letter I plan to update on these things:
- I recently enrolled in a Harvard edX course on the fundamentals of neuroscience with graded assignments (on top of my schoolwork) and I will receive a certificate. I am really excited for this!!!
- I have a connection at Beth Israel Hospital in Boston and will be shadowing (hopefully) a neuro doctor there and am trying to pursue a summer internship
- They don’t know much about me playing for the professor – I did mention in my interview but I want to exaggerate it more as it shos just how interested I am in the school. Probably will mention it in my letter
- I am going to reach out to a neuroscience professor at Princeton because I am genuinely interested in what they do there and their research. If this interaction goes well, I’ll mention it in my letter and try to name-drop.
Most of all I am going to emphasize just how badly I want to be a Tiger.
Please, leave any suggestions below to improve my chances of being admitted after being deferred! Any opinions are welcome Thank you