<p>It's for Johns Hopkins ED and I need someone to critique it really bad! it's only 500 words so...:D</p>
<p>And if you would like, I can look at urs ;)</p>
<p>Since you gave me good advice, I'd love to help you out as well!</p>
<p>I'll swap with you, you can read my Stanford intellectual vitality essay, I need to know if it's too ridiculous.</p>
<p>sure send it if you'd like</p>
<p>thanks guys :D</p>
<p>i think that's enough readers for me :)</p>
<p>Here's some professional advice:</p>
<p>Reed</a> Magazine: My Essay</p>