Please help me with my common app essay

<p>I've been stuck on my common app essay for weeks, constantly changing topics and revising. I finally settled on one essay, but I do not like my essay at all. However, I don't really have time to change my topic or write a completely new essay...
Can someone briefly skim over my essay, and give me their honest opinion?
Please PM me</p>

<p>Me! I’ve spent MONTHS on my comapp essay-- it’s pretty darn solid. I know exactly what they’re looking for in essays. And I’ll be brutally honest with yours. I can’t pm you becuase I literally made an account 10 minutes ago, but if you send me yours PM, I’ll read it over for sure!</p>

<p>Thank you for agreeing to help me! But I’ve tried sending it to a friend and she said that it is a trainwreck…I’m going to have to scrap it…But thanks for the offer. I hope the college process goes well for you!</p>