<p>I would really like to send my Why Yale essay to someone for comments. Thanks.</p>
<p>It’s done. No sense to drive yourself crazy. </p>
<p>I would not worry about it and I would not really send the essay to people on this site. Ask a teacher or a friend to look at it.</p>
<p>Why are you worrying about it at this time? You are stressing out for no reason. If someone says it is good and you don’t get in, it won’t matter. If they say it is bad, it may not be the reason for whatever outcome you get on December 16. Just hold tight and see where the chips fall.</p>