Did I misinterpret the prompt?

Hi, I would really appreciate if anyone could read over my Bowdoin supplemental essay and let me know what they think. I’m worried about not answering the prompt correctly. Other criticism is welcome as well!

I’m happy to take a look at it.

I just submitted my Bowdoin supplement a few days ago. I definitely think it’s tricky… They don’t ask much of a concrete question!

I know my opinion isn’t much better than yours, but if you want another pair of eyes I’d be happy to read it over.

I need some help with that too! Is it basically a more specified “why us” essay?

What’s the prompt?