different essay... need some different opinions.

<p>hey everyone. i have a new essay all typed up, and i like it a bit better than my old one.... if their are any readers out there who aren't applying for fall '09, i'd love some feedback.</p>

<p>hey pm it over ill help as much as i can</p>

<p>ill look at it just pm it over</p>

<p>pm me, i'll give some comments ASAP</p>