does anyone want to critque my essay?

[Bluexox123]

<p>does anyone want to critique a a ROUGH draft of my college admissions essay?
no new members, sorry! thanks!</p>

[hotinpursuit]

<p>i can.
pm me.</p>

[boilingwax]

<p>i’ll definitely help out. just send me a pm.</p>

[smartboy1220]

<p>I will read it.</p>

[Yennaaa]

<p>I’ll read it!</p>